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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 6:13am | IP Logged Quote Aslooker86

 I need help revising this.  Please use specific responses that make a number of suggestions. You can write suggestions as a list:

   The two films we saw were really different, having many remarkable differences between them.  The first film was full of energy while the second film was really mellow and, at times, even boring.  To say the least.  We strongly feel that the film would make an excellent film for a teenager's birthday.  I will defend my point of view by contrasting the two films and claiming my point loud and clear.

Thank you those of you who help identify the weaknesses in this introductory paragraph and suggested ways to improve it!



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